Darien:
I love your writing. You have so much voice throughout your essay and it makes it enjoyable to read. The length of your blog was perfect. You were able to convey all your thoughts and idea’s perfectly and it wasn’t too long. Your writing style is incredible. Your transitions are very smooth and your word choice is excellent. I only read your Thursday blog because I didn’t see your Real Wild Women/Men blog anywhere. Maybe I missed it, but so far just reading your one essay gave me great insight into your writing styles. I really can’t wait to read more of your blogs and see how our opinions differ!
April:
I really liked your Changing Families entry. I agree with you completely, especially when you talked about the first changes in families. I agree that the first drastic change began when women were starting to find jobs. I am glad you pointed that out in your essay, because I didn’t think about adding that to mine. Your transitions are extremely smooth. It really makes your entries easy to read. I also liked your Real Wild Women/Men blog. I loved the Rocky Horror Picture Show and that is a GREAT example of Wild Men. Your essays are filled with opinions and it is great to see you being so open and honest. I can’t wait to read more!!!
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