Rick:
In your “Which Is Better” blog, I really liked your introduction. It was strong and to the point. Immediately I knew where you stood on the topic and where your argument was going to go. I thought your transitions were smooth and this blog was really strong. It was a really well written entry.
In your “It’s Just Finance” blog I felt that your transitions could have been a little smoother. Your entry kind of jumped around from one topic to another but I liked how you really understood the reading and you were able to summarize the main points and explain it really well, but also with your own opinions thrown in there. I have really enjoyed reading your blog this semester!
Justin:
Your “443 freewrite” blog was really well written. Your transitions were very smooth and your opinion and voice jumped right out. I love that you throw in facts from the reading as well as your own opinions in a smooth manner. I feel like you could definitely elaborate more on this topic and even do your paper on it, if you wanted to.
Your “455 freewrite”, all I can say is wow! I don’t know what you are studying, but you know A LOT about finances it seems like. All the science and math behind it and everything. This was an awesome entry. I read the article but I felt like you covered soo much more than what was in the reading. Your transitions are very smooth (awesome!) and your opinions are still very strong. You have great writing and I’m glad I was able to read your blog.
Good luck on your papers!!!
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