Lauren:
I loved your Directed Freewrite essay. I am very impressed! I tried to do my essay on that and couldn’t answer ANY of the questions. I love the sentence “an idea is a thought taken for a walk”. That was such a good image and very powerful. I could picture this little tiny thing and as the “walk” progressed, it got bigger and bigger. This essay really showed me how creative you are. I loved reading it and wanted more! Please keep up your creativeness; it’s so much fun to read!
Jackie:
I really liked your Are We Smarter Than a Robot essay. I thought it was well constructed and laid out. Your paragraphs were strong and full of opinions. My favorite part of your essay was your second paragraph where you were talking about the difference between human intelligence and artificial intelligence. I agree with you completely that AI will only surpass us once it supersets our intelligence. I also agree with you that the human brain won’t ever be duplicated by a machine. I love your strong opinions and can’t wait to see how much we agree and disagree in the following units.
Katie:
I loved your What is Consciousness essay. You and I had different views on this one, which is why I really liked reading your essay. I believe that the study of consciousness is scientific while you don’t, which was really cool. I liked that we had different viewpoints because I really wanted to read why you thought otherwise. I agree with you when you said that it is amazing that this day in age scientists still can’t decide on a definition. You would think by now they would be able to. I thought your essay was a little shorted and needed just a little more, but what you had was great. Your opinion definitely shined and I was really impressed. I can’t wait to see what other viewpoints we disagree on.
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