Justin:
Your traumatic freewrite was just that! I loved the voice and the story telling. It was really great. When I got to the end of the story my mouth dropped! It was such an unexpected ending and I sat there stunned for a moment. It was so great and you conveyed the emotions of those involved extremely well. This was a great blog.
Your 386 Directed Freewrite was also amazing. Your intro was very strong and I knew immediately what your blog was going to be about. I also agree with you that I don’t think women should be stereotyped. I don’t think anybody should be stereotyped and I am really glad that you portrayed your own opinions. Great job!
Rick:
All I can say is Oh My God!!! Your traumatic freewrite was so shocking! I loved your story telling, I was glued (sorry no pun intended) to your story the whole time. I couldn’t stop reading it because I wanted to know why your backpack was stuck! I loved that you kept me waiting to the very end to find out what it was. That is so horrible though, I can’t believe your story. I hope you bought a better backpack!
In your Is It What They Say It Is? blog I felt your intro could have been a little more specific. I felt like you jumped right into your argument instead of preparing the essay. I agree with your blog completely. I think this music is totally degrading to women and I am actually glad to see that you feel the same way. You made a very compelling argument and your conclusion was very strong!
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